Comment on my lyrics please!?

I'm a guitarist and song writer I may not have the best songs in the world but I think you have potential and realistically your songs aren't even that difficult to play music to. Which is a good thing because you don't want anything too complicated for your first songs. What you need to do is audition in your local music newspaper. Here in Australia we have the Xpress nespaper where bands audition. What you do is you put an add for band players to audition then select a place to audition. Then you choose which band members you want and get them to play your song. If you know how to play that helps. Then put your songs together then you will have your band. That's the easy part then you have to reherse and get yourself a manager and play at venues around the city. You can even post songs on youtube with windows movie maker to get peoples opinions on your singing as well as fans and that's it really. If your willing to put the hard work into it you will go far. As for your song I loved it don't change the lyrics.